After the Storm
Text 1: The Greenhouse, by Mara Ellison
An original short story extract.
By the time Nia reached the school greenhouse, the storm had passed. Water dripped from the roof into the empty pots. The door stood open, knocking softly against its frame.
Nia stepped inside and called for the tortoise. Her voice sounded small among the rows of benches. A tray of seed packets had fallen to the floor, and muddy marks crossed the tiles towards the far end.
She followed them slowly. Behind the last bench, a leaf shifted. Nia stopped. Then the tortoise pushed its head out from beneath a watering can. She let out a breath she had been holding and crouched beside it.
How does Mara Ellison use language and structure to show Nia’s worry changing as she searches the greenhouse?
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146 exam-style questions on OCR GCSE English Language 3.2 Section A: Reading meaning and effects – content, covering 3.2.3 Impact of language, structure and grammar. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.