The room that removed the noise
Text: an original contemporary personal-account-style practice extract.
By late afternoon, I was ready for a silence that asked nothing of me. After a day of doors closing, phones ringing and conversations colliding in corridors, I imagined it as a blank sheet: clean, restful and undemanding. The guide pulled the heavy door shut. The fan disappeared first, then the voices outside, then the thin electrical hum I had not noticed until it was gone. The silence arrived in stages, as if somebody were switching off the world one room at a time.
For several seconds, the emptiness was impressive. Then it began returning things to me. Breath. Sleeve. Swallow. Each small sound stepped forward to perform. I shifted my weight and the floor answered through my shoes. My heartbeat, previously a private piece of machinery, seemed to have been moved beside my ears. I had entered the room to listen to nothing; instead, nothing had handed the microphone back to me.
When the guide opened the door, the corridor rushed in. “Peaceful?” she asked. “Interesting,” I replied, because the truthful answer needed more time. On the way out, the ventilation system roared above me, and I found its steady noise almost generous. The room had not shown me that silence was empty. It had shown me how many sounds I usually edited out, and how useful some of them were for keeping myself at a comfortable distance.
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