A trail after sunset
For its next issue, a youth culture magazine is inviting reviews of local evening activities. Imagine that you have experienced a night-time garden trail and are writing for its teenage readers. Create the venue and details of your visit.
The organisers collected opinions from 120 teenage visitors:
| Aspect of the trail | Responses |
|---|---|
| The illuminated route | 78 called it a highlight; 24 found some sections difficult to follow; 18 gave no opinion |
| The sound installations | 66 said they added to the atmosphere; 36 said they sometimes made conversation difficult; 18 gave no opinion |
| The time allowed | 54 thought it was about right; 42 wanted longer; 24 wanted a shorter visit |
Write a review that uses details of your visit to interpret these responses and decide which teenage visitors you would recommend the trail to.
You could explore:
You may also use your own ideas.
Your response will be assessed for communication and organisation, and for vocabulary, sentence structures, spelling and punctuation. The total includes 16 marks for vocabulary, sentence structures, spelling and punctuation.