The first morning at the library
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At eight o’clock, the library door stuck halfway open. I pushed with my shoulder, and the brass handle gave a small, reluctant click. Inside, the room smelled of paper and damp coats. My list said: unlock, switch on the lights, put out the returns box. It did not mention the silence.
By nine, the first visitors had arrived. A boy carried a book almost as wide as his chest; an older woman asked where the local history shelves had gone. I pointed them out, then watched the room begin to change. Chairs scraped into new positions. A quiet hello travelled further than I expected. The library had seemed to be waiting for us, but now it was busy waiting for everyone else.
At closing time, I put the returns box back by the door. The chairs were not quite in their rows, and a paper cup stood beside the window. I could have seen these as signs of a room left untidy. Instead, they looked like evidence that the day had happened. I turned off the lights, leaving the brass handle to catch the last strip of evening sun.
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