Before the first train

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In the grey before sunrise, the signal cabin was a square of yellow light beside the tracks. A worker leaned from its doorway and watched a red arm stand above the line. From this distance it seemed almost like a finger held up to silence the railway.

He walked to the signal post with a small tool bag bumping against his leg. At the base, he checked the wire connections, then signalled to his colleague in the cabin. The arm dipped, paused, then lifted again. He did not hurry to call it ready. Instead, he watched the movement twice more, his face turned towards the metal as if listening for an answer it could not give in words.

When the first train approached, its headlamps appeared beyond the curve. The worker stepped back and raised one hand towards the cabin. The signal changed, and the train passed through the morning without slowing. By then, the cabin light had almost disappeared in the daylight. The quiet check had lasted only minutes; its result was measured in a journey that did not have to stop.

Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage the reader.

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• language features and techniques
• structural techniques
• the effect on the reader.

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