Students are writing a guide for Year 7 pupils on choosing and joining after-school clubs for the first time. A draft guide was tried by 20 Year 7 pupils. Their feedback is shown below. Pupils could select more than one response.
| Feedback on the draft guide | Number of pupils |
|---|---|
| It was difficult to tell what to do first. | 14 |
| Examples of what happens at a club would help. | 11 |
| Some paragraphs were too long. | 8 |
Write a guide for the students writing the clubs guide. Explain how they can use the feedback to make their guide clear, useful and suitable for Year 7 pupils.
Your work will be assessed on communication and adaptation to audience and purpose (27 marks), and organisation and technical accuracy (18 marks).
281 exam-style questions on Edexcel A IGCSE English Language 1.3 Section B: Transactional Writing, covering 1.3.1 Focus of Section B, 1.3.2 Applying knowledge of text types to own writing, 1.3.3 Non-fiction writing techniques, planning and proofreading, 1.3.4 Writing an article for a magazine or newspaper, 1.3.5 Writing a speech, 1.3.6 Writing a letter, 1.3.7 Writing a guide, 1.3.8 Writing a review, and 1.3.9 Writing the text of a leaflet. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.