A number instead of a queue
Text A: Let lunchtime begin before the counter — an original proposal from a student committee
Our canteen queue runs along the wall and turns back towards the door. By the time some students reach the counter, they have spent much of lunch watching the same three posters. We propose a numbered collection system. Students would choose a meal before the lunch break and receive a number. A display would call them when it was ready, allowing them to sit with friends instead of standing in a line.
The first version could use existing school accounts, but it should not depend on owning a phone. A terminal near the canteen could print a token, and numbers could be displayed in more than one place. Staff would have an earlier indication of demand for each meal. In theory, they could prepare more accurately and reduce the disappointment of reaching the counter after a preferred dish has gone.
We do not claim that numbering creates more kitchen space or more staff. It changes where waiting happens. Even so, sitting down can make a wait feel different, especially for students who find a crowded corridor tiring. A system that records when an order was placed and when it was collected would also give us better evidence than the argument that the queue is “always terrible”.
A trial should begin with a small group and a limited menu. Students would need to know how late they could order and what would happen if they changed their minds. We should also check that collection does not create a second queue at the display. The point is to make lunch less dominated by waiting, not to replace a visible problem with a screen that looks modern. Students who use the trial should help identify confusing instructions, since the designers may overlook steps that seem obvious only to them.
Text B: The counter still has to serve the meal — an original response from the canteen supervisor
I welcome a serious look at lunchtime, but the longest line is not always the biggest delay. Some days the problem is that students arrive together; on others, they need time to choose, pay or find a tray. If we change the system without measuring those stages, we may solve the wrong part. A number can organise demand, but it cannot make an oven finish cooking sooner.
Early ordering would help us plan, provided orders are reliable. Food prepared for students who do not collect it creates another difficulty. We would need a clear cancellation time and an agreed response to missed numbers. Calling the same person repeatedly could slow everyone else. Keeping uncollected meals aside would require space and a way to tell which order belonged to whom.
There is also a difference between having no phone and being able to use the alternative. If the printing terminal has its own queue, or a student misses the display while outside, the system may be less convenient than the proposal suggests. Some students decide what they want only after seeing the food. They should not lose the chance to buy lunch because they did not make an earlier digital choice.
For a trial, I suggest one collection point for advance orders alongside a normal walk-up service. We should compare the total time from ordering to receiving food, not just the length of the visible line. Staff should record missed collections and extra tasks, while students report whether they actually had more usable lunchtime. If both groups see a benefit, we can expand. If not, a shorter-looking queue should not be mistaken for a better service.
Your headteacher has asked you to consider a numbered meal-collection system. Write a report evaluating the proposal and recommending how the school should proceed.
Use your own words and base your response on both sources. In your response:
Write about 250 to 350 words. Up to 10 marks are available for reading and up to 25 marks for writing.
100 exam-style questions on CIE IGCSE English Language 5.2 Section A Directed Writing (40 marks), covering 5.2.1 Question structure and stimulus texts, 5.2.2 Question 1(a) analysis and evaluation of the text(s), and 5.2.3 Question 1(b) directed writing task. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.