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5.2 Section A Directed Writing (40 marks)

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Question 12

A voice without a name

Text A: Let the box speak — an original student newsletter opinion

At our student council meetings, the same people tend to speak first. They are not necessarily wrong, but confidence can make an idea sound more representative than it is. A suggestion box would give the quieter students time to choose their words without watching thirty faces react. Leaving a name should be optional. If every comment needs a public owner, some of the comments we most need will never arrive.

Anonymity is sometimes dismissed as a hiding place for unkindness. That is possible, but an open meeting does not magically prevent unkind remarks either. The council can publish clear rules: discuss a problem or proposal, do not attack a person. A small team could remove identifying details before displaying suggestions. Students could then respond to the ideas themselves, rather than to the popularity of whoever submitted them.

The box must not become a place where paper goes to disappear. Each month, the council should report which suggestions it can act on, which it has referred to staff and which it has rejected, with reasons. Even a rejected suggestion can be useful if it reveals a misunderstanding about how the school works. A response might explain a constraint that students had never been told about.

Not every useful idea arrives fully costed and perfectly expressed. A student who writes “the courtyard is miserable” may be noticing something important without yet knowing whether the answer is seating, shelter or a different rule. The council’s job is to explore that concern, not dismiss it because its author has not written a complete improvement plan. Representatives could group similar concerns and invite further comments without asking the first writer to identify themselves. That would let an uncertain suggestion begin a conversation rather than arrive as a finished decision.

Text B: Someone must be able to ask why — an original letter from a former student representative

We tried an anonymous box in my final year. At first, we were delighted by the number of slips. Then we discovered how difficult it was to turn them into decisions. “Better lunches” appeared eleven times. Did that mean cheaper, larger, quicker to buy, or different food? We could not ask the writers. Counting the slips made the concern look clear when its meaning was not.

Some comments contained allegations about named people. Removing the names did not necessarily protect anyone: a small group could still recognise the incident. Students also began assuming that the box was a confidential reporting service, although the council had neither the training nor the authority to investigate personal complaints. A route for suggestions should not pretend to replace the school’s established ways of asking for individual help.

I am not arguing that students must stand on a stage to be heard. A named private message, a conversation with a representative or a short written response before a meeting can all make participation less intimidating. The person collecting an idea can promise not to announce its author while still being able to clarify what is meant.

Our most useful change was to offer two routes. Students could submit an anonymous general proposal, or ask a representative to contact them privately. We also read out a monthly explanation of what the council could actually decide. The box became smaller in our expectations and more useful in practice. Its value depended less on how many slips it swallowed than on whether anybody could explain what happened afterwards.

Your school council is considering an anonymous suggestion box. Write a speech to fellow students recommending how the council should collect and respond to their ideas.

Use your own words and base your response on both sources. In your response:

  • evaluate the benefits and limitations of anonymous suggestions
  • recommend an approach that gives students a voice and produces useful responses

Write about 250 to 350 words. Up to 10 marks are available for reading and up to 25 marks for writing.

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5.2 Section A Directed Writing (40 marks) Questions

  1. IGCSE
  2. /English Language
  3. /5.2 Section A Directed Writing (40 marks)

100 exam-style questions on CIE IGCSE English Language 5.2 Section A Directed Writing (40 marks), covering 5.2.1 Question structure and stimulus texts, 5.2.2 Question 1(a) analysis and evaluation of the text(s), and 5.2.3 Question 1(b) directed writing task. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.

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