The sculpture walk
Text: an original contemporary sculpture-review-style practice extract.
I began the walk by keeping count. At the steel arch, two cyclists rode through without slowing. Beside the carved stone bench, a man sat with his back to the carved side. In the margin of my notes I wrote “missed”, and drew a line beneath it.
Later, the same man came back. He set a paper cup on the bench’s flat end and stood beside it, looking towards the road. A child crossed the arch’s shadow twice; the adult with her looked down at a phone, then lifted it as the shadow shifted. At the next piece, a woman read the plaque to its final line. When a bus appeared at the junction, she folded the map she had been holding.
I had expected the walk to gather its visitors around the works. Instead, they seemed to keep breaking away. Yet the man returned; the child crossed the shadow again; the woman finished the plaque. None of this tells me what they thought. It may tell me only what I wanted to count.
The route offered twelve sculptures. My notes accounted for fewer. I left the list unfinished, though I am no longer sure whose attention it was measuring.
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