Who should redesign the shared space?

A youth magazine is inviting readers to respond to this statement:

“Pupils should have a real say in how shared spaces at school are redesigned.”

Write an article for the magazine giving your views on this statement. Consider the strongest argument against your own position and conclude by recommending how a school should make decisions about redesigning a shared space.

Your response will be assessed for communication and organisation, and for vocabulary, sentence structures, spelling and punctuation. The total includes 16 marks for vocabulary, sentence structures, spelling and punctuation.