The timetable in the harbour window

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The ferry office window held three versions of the morning timetable. One was pinned beneath a photograph of the harbour; another had a corner curled over the sailing time; the newest was taped so carefully that its change notice faced the wall. Passengers leaned close to the glass, each trying to read a different answer.

On Tuesday, a crew member came ashore to explain that fog had delayed the first crossing. A passenger had already arranged to meet her sister at the far landing. The clerk suggested writing changes on a board outside, but the crew member worried that people waiting at the pier might miss it. In the end, the same update went up in both places, each marked with the time it appeared.

The sea did not become more predictable. The information did. By the afternoon, the office window had one timetable and a clear note directing people to the latest update. It was not a promise that every journey would run smoothly. It was a way to stop uncertainty spreading further than the fog.

Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage the reader.

In your answer, consider:

• language features and techniques
• structural techniques
• the effect on the reader.

Support your views with detailed reference to the extract.