Before the arcade opens
An original imagined descriptive account of an amusement arcade before opening.
Before the arcade opened, the prizes watched an empty room. A row of soft bears sat behind glass with expressions of permanent encouragement. Above them, a sign promised a winner every time, although the only visitor was a cleaner who had no intention of competing.
The machines had lost their voices. Their bright panels held still, and the carpet revealed a pattern I had never noticed beneath the usual procession of shoes. At the far end, a racing seat faced a dark screen. Without the road rushing towards it, the plastic steering wheel seemed an unusually serious toy.
The cleaner moved a chair with a short scrape. It sounded indecently clear. In the afternoon, that noise would have disappeared into bells, music and the repeated arrival of imaginary danger. Now a bucket placed on the floor supplied the room's entire dramatic event.
Then a switch was pressed. Colour travelled along the wall. One tune began, another interrupted, and a recorded voice welcomed nobody in particular with tremendous confidence. The racing road returned and waited for someone to move while sitting still.
At the entrance, the first family paused. A child pointed towards the bears. Their expressions had not changed, but they seemed to have acquired an audience, which made the room look ready to believe its own promises again.
Examine the methods the writer uses to reveal the difference between the arcade’s quiet appearance and its public spectacle.
80 exam-style questions on Oxford AQA IGCSE English Language 5.1.4 R4: Explain and evaluate writers' use of features. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.