Students are writing a guide for Year 7 pupils on choosing and joining after-school clubs for the first time. A draft guide was tried by 20 Year 7 pupils. Their feedback is shown below. Pupils could select more than one response.
| Feedback on the draft guide | Number of pupils |
|---|---|
| It was difficult to tell what to do first. | 14 |
| Examples of what happens at a club would help. | 11 |
| Some paragraphs were too long. | 8 |
Write a guide for the students writing the clubs guide. Explain how they can use the feedback to make their guide clear, useful and suitable for Year 7 pupils.
Your work will be assessed on communication and adaptation to audience and purpose (27 marks), and organisation and technical accuracy (18 marks).
49 exam-style questions on Edexcel A IGCSE English Language 1.3.7 Writing a guide. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.