Source A: The hive opens

Every bee in the box had noticed me.

That was what I told myself as I stood at the end of the garden, sealed inside a white suit that crackled whenever I moved. The veil pressed close to my face. My gloves were too large. Somewhere inside the wooden hive, thousands of wings combined into a single low vibration, a tiny engine turning beneath the lid.

Noor placed a metal tool in my hand. ‘You will only need this later.’

Later. The word suggested that I might survive the next few minutes and be given another task.

I had watched the safety demonstration twice. Keep the veil closed. Keep your movements slow. Do not stand in front of the entrance. The instructions had seemed almost boring indoors, where the practice hive was empty and the only buzzing came from a failing ceiling light. Here, each rule felt like the final line of a warning notice.

Noor approached the hive without hesitation. Bees crossed in front of her sleeves and settled on her shoulders. She lifted the lid by a few centimetres.

The sound expanded.

I stepped backwards. My heel struck an empty plant pot and sent it rolling along the path. The clatter seemed enormous. A few bees rose above the hive, circling, and I imagined them passing on the news: the tall intruder is frightened; the tall intruder is clumsy; begin at the ankles.

‘Breathe out,’ Noor said.

I had not realised I was holding my breath.

She waited until the pot stopped moving. Then she raised the lid fully. Nothing rushed at us. The bees continued with their work, travelling over the tops of the wooden frames in steady lines. Their movement was busy but not chaotic. One paused to clean its antennae. Another squeezed through a gap and vanished below.

Noor loosened the first frame and lifted it slowly. The bees covered both sides, layered so closely that the wood appeared to have grown a moving surface. My first instinct was still to retreat, but there was nowhere to look except at them.

‘Find the empty cells,’ she said.

At first, I saw only bees. Then the pattern separated. Beneath their bodies were rows of wax chambers: some dark, some shining, some capped with pale, uneven circles. The noise stopped being a warning and became information. It rose when Noor moved the frame and settled when she held it still.

She turned the frame towards the light. I leaned closer.

A bee walked across the thumb of her glove. Its feet were finer than eyelashes. Its wings caught the sun for a moment, clear except for a net of dark veins. I followed it as it crossed from leather to wood, testing each surface before moving on.

‘Your turn,’ Noor said.

The metal tool was slippery inside my glove. I placed its edge beneath the next frame and pressed. Nothing happened. I adjusted the angle, tried again and felt the seal release with a soft click.

‘Now lift.’

This time, my hands moved slowly because I chose them to, not because fear had made them stiff. The frame rose. Bees flowed around my fingers, parting and closing like water around stones. I kept it level. I found the empty cells. I listened for the change in the hive’s note.

When Noor reached to take the frame, I held it for another second.

‘Give me the next one,’ I said.

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