A supervisor at a pop-up repair event has drafted this note for first-time helpers:
Prior to the opening of the collection desk, effect the placement of repaired items in their numbered trays. Subsequent to the completion of this procedure, verify that the matching collection slip is positioned beside each tray.
Rewrite the note in clear, familiar language for first-time helpers, keeping both actions in the same order. Then explain which of your changes most helps these readers, and why.
146 exam-style questions on WJEC GCSE English Language 3.1.4 Editing task at word, sentence and text level. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.