An editor is revising this paragraph from a report about a trial booking system for a community workshop.
Most participants booked a workbench without difficulty. The final confirmation message did not show the starting time. The booking system was entirely reliable.
Choose the version that best improves the paragraph.
Most participants booked a workbench without difficulty. However, the final confirmation message did not show the starting time. Overall, the booking system was entirely reliable.
Most participants booked a workbench without difficulty. Therefore, the final confirmation message did not show the starting time. Overall, the booking system was entirely reliable.
Most participants booked a workbench without difficulty. Therefore, the final confirmation message did not show the starting time. Overall, the system worked well but needed one improvement.
Most participants booked a workbench without difficulty. However, the final confirmation message did not show the starting time. Overall, the system worked well but needed one improvement.
146 exam-style questions on WJEC GCSE English Language 3.1.4 Editing task at word, sentence and text level. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.