Visitors among the fruit trees
The following practice sources concern invented people and places.
Text One: An original account of a writing workshop held in a working orchard.
Our writing group arrived while the morning's first crates of apples were being collected. Several of us had imagined sitting alone beneath the trees, but the workshop leader reminded us that the orchard had not stopped working for our visit. We followed her between marked rows and kept the main track clear for small vehicles carrying fruit.
The wooden stools were light enough to move whenever the pickers needed another row. At first, I found this repeated settling and leaving irritating. A reversing vehicle interrupted one reading, and a stack of empty crates appeared beside the tree I had begun to describe. Yet these changes gave us more to write about than the peaceful country scene I had expected.
At lunchtime, the workers used the shelter we had planned to occupy, so we ate beside the packing shed instead. From there, we could see fruit being checked and sorted. The workshop became less about borrowing an attractive setting and more about observing a place with its own timetable. By the end, our writing included ladders, muddy wheels and brief conversations as well as branches and fruit.
Text Two: An original profile of an invented orchard manager who organises visitor days.
The orchard manager opens part of the site to visitors on selected autumn weekends, while picking continues elsewhere. Each morning, she agrees a route with the picking team. A row shown on the visitor map may be closed if fruit there is ready to collect, so temporary signs direct groups along a different path.
Visitor numbers are limited because the rows are narrow and the central track must remain open. Talks and tastings take place at the edge of the orchard, where folding tables can be removed quickly. The manager's booking message advises people to expect uneven ground, working vehicles and changes to the advertised route.
She believes the working conditions add value to a visit. People may arrive expecting an orchard to be silent and still, but they leave having seen some of the decisions involved in bringing in the fruit. Even so, she does not treat workers as part of a performance. Visitors observe only from agreed areas, and questions are saved for a member of staff who has set aside time to answer them. The aim is to reveal the orchard's work without obstructing it.
Synthesise what you learn from both texts about allowing visitors into a working orchard.
382 exam-style questions on WJEC GCSE English Language 3.1.3 Short and extended response question types. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.