Recording the condition of local trees
Both texts below are newly written practice sources about invented projects.
Text One: An original report about a fictional volunteer tree survey.
A neighbourhood group asked volunteers to record the condition of 48 trees beside roads and footpaths. Each tree had a numbered tag, and volunteers were instructed to enter the tree number before recording their observations. During the first trial, eleven forms lacked a number. Although some contained detailed comments, the organisers could not tell which trees they described.
Volunteers recorded leaf cover, broken branches and damage to the trunk in separate sections. Each section included a ‘not sure’ category. The organisers preferred an honest uncertainty to a confident guess. Volunteers also took one photograph showing the whole tree and another showing any particular damage. A tree specialist later reviewed records in which the written description and photograph appeared inconsistent.
Heavy rain prevented one team from completing its route. Their unvisited trees were marked ‘not inspected’, rather than being recorded as showing no damage. Another route included steps and a narrow path, so volunteers who could not use it were reassigned to accessible streets where the same recording method could be followed. The project valued a carefully completed short route more than a large number of uncertain entries.
Text Two: An original review of a different fictional tree-monitoring project.
A parks team worked with residents to monitor trees around several public buildings. Before surveying, participants practised using reference cards that showed the categories on the recording sheet. They compared their first observations and discussed why general descriptions such as ‘looks unhealthy’ could not be checked consistently.
| Issue found during the first survey | Change made |
|---|---|
| Some trees were recorded twice | A numbered map was issued to every team |
| Descriptions of leaf loss varied greatly | Reference examples were added to the survey cards |
| Photographs did not show where damage was located | Volunteers took both a whole-tree image and a close image |
The team planned to repeat the survey in the same month of the following year. Its report warned that observations made in different seasons could create a misleading comparison. It also noted events such as recent pruning or storm damage beside the relevant record.
Residents sometimes offered explanations based on their knowledge of the area. These comments were kept, but were labelled separately from what volunteers could see. A split branch, for example, was an observation; its cause might remain uncertain. The parks team therefore reported patterns in the evidence without presenting every suggested explanation as established fact.
Synthesise what you learn from both texts about collecting and interpreting dependable evidence in community tree surveys.
382 exam-style questions on WJEC GCSE English Language 3.1.3 Short and extended response question types. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.