Who gets to leave a comment?
Text A: an original contemporary practice extract.
The museum’s comment wall used to be the first thing I read after visiting the old harbour room. It was also the last thing I could read: notes covered notes, and a useful correction about a boat’s name vanished beneath a drawing of a sun. The museum has since replaced the wall with a weekly selection beside the relevant displays.
Some visitors miss seeing every contribution. I understand that; a hurried sentence can contain a detail no researcher thought to ask for. But a museum is not a notebook left open on a desk. Someone has to check that a comment belongs with the object, and visitors should be able to find it again. The selected notes are dated and kept in a folder, so a correction can be followed up instead of disappearing in the crowd.
I would rather see fewer comments with a clear place in the collection than a wall that promises to show everyone and ends up readable by nobody. The new arrangement is less like a conversation in progress. It is better at showing what the museum has heard and what it still needs to investigate.
Text B: an original contemporary practice extract.
A child once wrote beside the museum’s photograph of the old harbour: “My grandad says the boats came in from the other side.” The label did not mention that. The note stayed on the wall for a few days, and people stopped to talk about it. I doubt it would have been chosen for the weekly display: it was not a correction anyone could verify on the spot.
That is precisely why I value the unedited wall. A visitor may notice a family connection, a local name or a question that the official account leaves untouched. Those responses do not all need to become evidence. Their presence tells people that history is not only what an institution has already arranged into paragraphs.
A museum can keep its records carefully without making the public display look finished. Let comments remain for a short, stated period, then clear the space for new ones. Some will be mistaken, some slight, and some will open a door the display did not know was there. A wall of replies should make room for beginnings, not just conclusions.
Compare how the writers present their ideas and perspectives about displaying visitors’ comments in a local history museum. Support your comparisons with detailed references to both texts.
834 exam-style questions on Edexcel GCSE English Language 2.3 Content: non-fiction study and transactional text types, covering 2.3.9 Write an article, 2.3.10 Write a letter, 2.3.11 Write a review, 2.3.12 Write a text for a speech, and 2.3.13 Write a section for a guide, textbook, leaflet or booklet. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.