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Question 175

An original fiction passage set in the nineteenth century.

The classroom was usually noisy before lessons, but that morning even the fire seemed to burn quietly. Mr Alden, the school inspector, sat beside Miss Merton’s desk with a watch, a notebook and three sharpened pencils arranged before him. The pupils occupied four straight rows. Whenever somebody moved, a floorboard complained.

Mr Alden called each pupil to the front and allowed no more than two questions. When Noah’s name was spoken, the boy rose so quickly that his slate struck the bench. Several children looked up. Noah walked between the rows with his eyes fixed on the inspector’s watch.

First, Mr Alden asked him to read a short passage. Noah read every word correctly, although his voice became quieter as he continued. The passage described a traveller approaching a house where every window was dark. It ended with the sentence, “He had mistaken silence for safety.”

“Why was the traveller mistaken?” Mr Alden asked.

Noah knew that something frightening was waiting inside the house. He had understood it when Miss Merton read the passage the previous afternoon. Now he noticed the listening faces behind him and the inspector’s pencil resting above the page. The answer seemed to retreat from him.

“Because it was silent, sir,” he said at last.

Mr Alden made a short mark in his notebook. Beside Noah’s name, he wrote, “Reads accurately; understands only the plain meaning.”

Miss Merton explained that Noah often helped the younger pupils with their reading. Mr Alden replied that every child must be judged under the same conditions. He did not speak unkindly, but he closed the notebook before she could continue.

At midday, heavy rain kept Mr Alden in the classroom while the pupils ate their bread by the fire. A younger girl named Elsie carried the reading book to Noah. She pointed to the sentence about silence and asked what it meant.

Noah drew two small houses on his slate. In the first, he added smoke, an open door and a figure waving from a window. In the second, he drew closed shutters.

“The quiet house only looks safe,” he told her. “The traveller thinks that nothing is happening because he cannot hear anything. But the silence may be a warning. Perhaps the people inside are hiding, or waiting for him.”

Elsie nodded and gave the book back. Noah wiped the houses from his slate with his sleeve. Only then did he see Mr Alden standing beside the desk.

“You gave me none of that explanation,” the inspector said.

Noah looked towards the empty rows. “There were not so many people waiting for me to finish this time, sir.”

Mr Alden opened his notebook. The first mark beside Noah’s name remained, but beneath it he added a second sentence. It was longer than the space provided and continued into the margin. During the afternoon, he no longer kept his pencil ready while each child answered. He laid it down and listened first.

“The writer convincingly shows that one short test cannot reveal everything a child is capable of.”

Evaluate how successfully the writer presents this idea. Support your judgement with detailed references to the passage.

You may wish to consider:

  • how the inspection affects Noah
  • what Noah shows when he explains the sentence to Elsie
  • how Mr Alden's judgement changes at the end.
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