The torn election poster
An original fiction passage set in the nineteenth century.
The election poster had been pasted over the baker’s old price list. It promised fairness in large blue letters and named Mr Vale as the candidate who would deliver it. His son Tom stopped beside it on the way to school. Across the street, another candidate’s poster had torn in the wind, leaving only half the face visible.
A supporter of Mr Vale laughed at the damaged likeness and suggested pulling the rest down. Tom said the wind had already done enough. The man asked whether he wanted his father to lose. Tom looked at the word fairness above the bakery door. He had heard it repeated at every meeting in their house.
He fetched paste from the shopkeeper and fixed the torn edge of the other poster. Some of the paper was missing, so the repair could not restore the face completely. His father arrived while he was smoothing it. The supporter began explaining what Tom had done, as though reporting a betrayal. Mr Vale asked for the brush.
Together they pressed the loose corner against the wall. At the next meeting, Mr Vale mentioned the damaged poster without using his son’s action as a story about his own virtue. The election remained uncertain. Tom passed both notices in the morning, seeing his father’s promise beside an opponent’s face that neither of them had needed to destroy.
“The passage successfully tests a public promise against a small everyday action.”
Evaluate how successfully the writer presents this idea. Support your judgement with detailed references to the passage.
120 exam-style questions on Edexcel GCSE English Language 1.3 Content: prose fiction study requirements, covering 1.3.1 Read challenging prose fiction for the unseen 19th-century extract. Each one has a worked solution and a mark scheme showing where the marks go.