The figure in the gallery

An original fiction passage set in the nineteenth century.

The theatre gallery should have been empty. Mara had stayed behind to collect the music left after rehearsal, and the porter was locking the street doors below. Above the stage, a pale face watched from the first row. She called to it. No answer came. The porter said every performer had gone home.

He raised the lamp, but the gallery rail hid everything beneath the face. Mara remembered a costume rehearsal in which a mask had been left on a seat. She offered this explanation too quickly, hoping that naming a harmless possibility would make it true. Then the face seemed to turn. The porter lowered the lamp and told her to remain by the stairs.

He went up alone. Mara listened to each step, then to the pause at the top. A soft dragging sound followed. When he returned, he carried a plaster head and the cloth that had been draped over its shoulders. The draught from an open window had moved the cloth and shifted the head on its loose stand.

Mara laughed with relief. The porter set the prop beside the lamp, where its painted eyes looked absurdly fixed. Yet when he asked her to fetch the music from the stage, she requested that he leave the lamp on the stairs. The gallery was empty now. Knowing why the figure had moved did not immediately make the dark space feel ordinary.

“The harmless explanation resolves the mystery without completely removing Mara’s fear.”

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